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Scars of a Cyborg page 22

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Silver gets the smile and the laugh he enjoys most for Marina. He vows that his heart will remain beating for her even after he dies. Now that is a promise that can never be broken.

Corny. I know it.

It took me forever to get this page out right. I couldn't think of good dialogue or anything for it, so I had to ask around. And I thank everyone who helped me. I was told to put in a bit of Silver's humor and I added it thanks to Musashden's help.
I hate how panel seven turned out. I tried again on a new angle for Marina and I think it stinks. I don't think the bubble saying *giggle* was necessary, but I just wanted to point out that she was giggling and not just smiling.
And I think I made her too small in the last panel. And her shoulders are raised, yes, but Ugh! it looks like her neck is gone. Ugh.

EDIT!!! I fixed her shoulder on the last panel. That's much better. Now she has a neck.

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Marina Seadrift © DisneyFan-01
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ElwinRansom's avatar
As corny as it may be, it is simple; it is true; it is heart warming; and it will never get old.