A Beautiful Night - Pt 1 - Pg 2

As you can see, the two of them are a kissing cuddling couple at this point.  A major spark between them.  Now for Silver to fan the flames up.

Gah, can this get any more corny?  Why can't I write good romantic dialogue that doesn't seem so teenager?  Gah, well, what do you think?

The third panel was hard for me with Marina's head angle.  I mean, her shoulder is up and she's looking at him over it and it's not an easy angle to draw out.  I think I kinda broke her neck a bit.  D'oh!  And her eyes in the same panel. . . .  Ugh!  Why me?

Pg 3 - fav.me/d85b8po

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Marina Seadrift © DisneyFan-01